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NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!! PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE WRITE SOME MORE CHAPTERS!! PLEASE THIS STORY IS MY FAVORITE OF ALL TIME I SWEAR ... CAN U DO A EPILOGUE OR SOMETHING THIS STORY ROCKS MY GREEN SOKS!!!!!
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*claps* very nice, exceptionally beautiful. i'm so glad they are on the road to acceptance - and i love the warmth rin feels in her heart. BEGININGS OF LOVE!!!!!!! oh, i'm so happy i might just break out into song. wonderful job and i'm glad your writing a sequel - this is definately a sequel story. there's soooooo much left to be said and i know i'm not alone in saying we all want to see the love and soulmate completion finally come together. your a brilliant writer with a true gift. give urself a pat on the back for a job well done! can't wait to read ur sequel!!!

I have to say, that I was a little leery of this story, when I first started reading. With such dark subject matter, I was worried about how well it would be pulled off. It could not have been a story where Sesshoumaru marches in, kills the bad guy, and runs off with Rin..happily ever after--at least not that quickly. You did an absolutely beautiful job with this story. Everything is handled realistically, and even though this is an AU, you did an excellent job at keeping the cast in character. The final chapter really moved me. I was nearly in tears, and I am not a cryer. I can tell you put a lot of effort into your writing, and it really shows. I am thoroughly looking forward to the sequel.

AHAHHGHGHHAAA!!! *clap clap clap clap clap!!!* Beautiful ending! And there better be a sequel!!!

*sighs* such a beautiful story, you really should write a sequel, *sighs* leaves you with a bit of a hope, a warmfuzzy and a bit of sorrow, such a lovely tale, like a gorgeous painting with broad strokes of color and emotion

A very deep story. Would luv to read the rest!

hi I realy like read this story i hope put chapter 16 up so.

I wonder what Sesshoumaru will think nuYanuYasha and Rin keep writing. I just now read these new chapters. I think Sesshoumaru will me inquiring on what his brother was doing with Rin, what youkai wouldn't? It is a good story, continue.

Hey, I don't know how much longer I can wait! I'm going to bug you to death with reviews everyday until you update!!!! FEAR ME!! FEAR MY UPDATE POWER OVER YOU!!! HURRY HURRY HURRY! I'm know I'm speaking for a multitude of people! We LOVE YOU, UPDATE NOW!!!

I love your story...I adore Sess/Rin pairing so I was piss off at first, you created all these bad things that were happening to Rin. But, I felt happy when Sesshoumaru started to show feelings for her and, mark her to protect her even though she scare of him right now...The chapters that follow along after the first two only made me more interested in your story. I know you said that you wanted to keep the story dark..but, for my two cents .I hope you put in a spray of sunshine in there for Rin and Sesshoumaru...because life always have another turn in it even in the darkest of time..You are a very talent author and I hope to be reading more stuff from you in the future....Please if you can email me when you have the last chapter up...Take care...