rate_review Reviews

Well done :)

You are done with story and you are writing a sequel yyiiiipppee!!! I can not wait till it is posted. Will this
continue to be an angst or will some romance be in this sequel (in much later chapters). Be looking for
that sequel. ^_^

ok atleast u said there was a sequel coming. b/c i really want to know what happens next.can't wait.

God, you are so very talented at storytelling, I could cry. The is a wonderful story, even with it's darkness, which is something I have only seen once before. And, trust me, I have read a LOT of fanfics. Keep up the good work and post another couple of chapters soon, ok? you're killing me here!

im glad it ended good. yay! she finally accepted him. your story was great! i enjoyed it so much!!! it was actually the story that got me into dark fics! i am looking forward to your sequel. update soon! =]

Hey scarecrow! I just loved how you finished this! I can't wait for the sequel, you can bet I will be all over that! hehe. My favorite part of this whole chapter was when Sess was kneeling before her, and her perspective on how he looked. Huggles!
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Wow! This has been an awesome story. I wasn't sure how I was going to take Sess showing emotions other than anger,
but by the way you discribed it, I felt the power of the bond instead. I do agree that time has to pass for
Rin to be able to trust Sess, and if you want to move years into the future, I can see that happening. Will Naraku be part
of the sequel? Obviously, he will be a shadow, bull hll he still manage to hurt her. I hope you explain why Naraku kher her
to begin with in the next story. I am very curious to why he would raise a little girl. After all, it took a few years before
he could abuse her, and he did hire a therapist for her. Good luck on your next story, and if you do an email updatet alert,
SIGN ME UP!!!!!!
See you in the sequel.

Jesus.... I have yet to find a fanfic out there that makes me quiver with such anticipation!!! You are the BEST! I recomend you to everyone, pls pls, hurry with the sequel!!! I'm dying here!!!

I like to say," DAM THAT WAS EXCELLENT!!!!!!!!!"....This story is so powerful, and emotional ...I was crying so much ..when Rin final decide to see Sesshoumaru , I was screaming "YES"....you are the only authour who ever brought Sess to his knees.....That was a nice touch!!...to see Sesshoumaru showing hardcore emotions..I was shock.......I can not wait for the sequel..PLEASE DON'T MAKE IT AS DARK!!!!...I'm begging you....let them have a happy ever after ending......I also hope you are sending some of your work off to writing contests.....you are way to good not too.....Well, that it for now, I'll be waiting for the sequel........

you have a grstorstory!!! you said chapter 16 was going to be your last (aww) i was hoping you would cotinue the story after she got better and her life after that b/c your story can go far!! (not to say that its all ready good) well im just a silly reviewer and your the writer so whatever well i hope you make a sequal or somthing and i saw your fic on mm.org great!! well byes!!!