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for Heart of Pain, Heart of Ice

by Strawberries

person Setryochi
schedule April 29, 2004 at 12:00 AM
@.@ I have tears in my eyes yet again. You're such a good writer. Hope my stories will be as good as your's one day. I can't wait to see the sequel! ^^

Set-chan
person pristinediamond
schedule April 26, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I love your story and how you gave a new twist on the Sess/Rin story. Of course, instead of Sess reviving Rin with his Tensaiga, he revives her in a hospital, *shrugs* same diff. Anyways, I noticed in your earlier chapters that Sesshoumaru was able to "see" where Ris ans and what she was feeling. Is Rin going to be able to feel Sesshoumaru's emotions when he clams up, or will she have to accept him more? Keep up the good work and I can't wait until the next chapter!
person destiny
schedule April 24, 2004 at 12:00 AM
YAY!!!! Yve dve done it! I've been waitin' 4ever for Chapter 16!!! Great job! Your story made me cry when Rinalinall allow Sesshy to come to visit her. Please post the sequal soon!!! And PLZZ email me when it's up since I won't know what the tittle will be. Thanks xoxo
person Caroline
schedule April 24, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I just drew rin from your fic ^^ I think it looks pretty good if I can upload it... maybe I can send it to ya...if you want....
schedule April 24, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story. You have done a wonderful job of involving your readers in your characters' lives. It is impossible to read this and not care. When I found aff.net, I was searching for a home for some o mor more graphic fanfics, with reading stories being a secondary benefit. I'm glad I took time to browse the site, because this story became one of my instant favorites. I am a big fan of angst, and your writing has supplied me well. This is my first review, and it goes to you! Thanks for the many hours of reading! I'm looking forward to a sequel.... :)
person lowla
schedule April 23, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Great:)can't what to read the sequal
person psycho
schedule April 22, 2004 at 12:00 AM
yeah i lke it. update soon
person Bsasami
schedule April 22, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Finally Sesshomaru got to see her. I am sooo...HAPPY. Can't wait for the sequel.
person New Fan
schedule April 21, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I wanted to give you a proper review. I notice that Rin still has her child-like qualities. I sense that when Rin thought about how Sess is and
if he will be kind and will her her outside. I thought it was a great touch to the story. It looks like Sess has realized that his action
toward Rin has cost him. Why was he so angry when he bit Rin??? I hope that you can answer that soonu meu mention in this chapter 'school'. How
difficult will it be for Rin or will it?? Will Sesss allow Rin to return to that school or go to another school? Will he allow her to go to school at all? Maybe
he would have her have school at home. Does everyone really 'knows' about Rin and her situation with her 'father' or has Sess fix that
by keeping it out of the press to protect his mate. I absolutely loved how Sesshoumaru 'surrendered' himself to Rin when he was
on one knee and he openly showed himself to Rin. I thought that was so romantic. I thought that was the best part of the chapter and a
perfecting end and beginning to your sequel. Please inform me when the sequel will be available please. ^_^ Thanks.
person Moon Dog
schedule April 21, 2004 at 12:00 AM
*sighs* I am so glad when I saw another chapter for your story. I started dancing for joy when I read that you would indeed do a sequel. I love reading your stories, so plz never stop writing them. Also you should mention where Shippo is at this point of time. All the readers know is that he was with Inuyasha last. But since Inuyasha been keeping Rin company, what did he do with Shippo?