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for Heart of Pain, Heart of Ice

by Strawberries

person chica101
schedule May 21, 2004 at 12:00 AM
wow this story was so great and touching. it really touched me. it also made me a sad but it mad me happy in the end.
I cant wait until you make a sequel.
schedule May 20, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This...This was the first time I have ever read a truely dark fic. And I have to say I choose well. It..it...I just can't explain what I fwlt while reading this. Granted there was great shock at what was being done. And that compelled me to keep reading chapter after chapter, til the end. But I have to say the ending was a bit diappointing, but I guess I can understand why you stopped it where you did. Rin was going to accept him and that was what needed to be resovled, not her and him living happily ever after, then it wouldn't be a dark fic. So kudos on the entire story, and its just too bad Naraku didn't get killed after what he did to Rin. Anyhoo, like I said, this was very good. Until next time!
person hentiafluffy
schedule May 15, 2004 at 12:00 AM
this stroy rocks I want more! please do more on this story
person Beruda
schedule May 13, 2004 at 12:00 AM
A very nice ending to a wonderful story. Again I want to congratulate you, you've done a great job and yill ill I hope keep writing. But its not really the ending I hope, I'm sure we all want to see how this relationship developes.
person drake220
schedule May 12, 2004 at 12:00 AM
please please please tell me you are doing a sequel! i NEED a sequel! i haven't seen your story in forever and i missed about 5 new chapters but i need a sequel! theres so much you can do! PLEASE PLEASE!!! great fic BTB!
person Kae_noel
schedule May 11, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Bravisimo!!!!!! sucha beautiful job, so bittersweet so lovely! *sighs happily* yes a very satisfying ending to a fabulously written story, beautiful.
person yasmin
schedule May 11, 2004 at 12:00 AM
i love this story !! please let me know whens the sequel , i cant wait to see what happens nextttt!!!!!!!
person DracOnyx
schedule May 11, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Very nice. Would definitely like to read more . . . so WRITE! *stamps her foot and then relents* Please?
person INUNAIOMI
schedule May 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
awwww! that was your best chapter. whats the name of you new fic?
person LadyC
schedule May 2, 2004 at 12:00 AM
ok that was a great chappie, but now im sad *Tear! when is the sequel coming out. i cant wait.