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by chels

person Mija
schedule September 15, 2003 at 12:00 AM
as usual I soooooo loved the last two chaps..that son of Naraku's is creeeeeeepy man..but I like and this new chick of Narakus? hmmmm no wonder Kagura is jealous..hehe..and awwwwwww Tsuku cares for Sango and she for him how sweet, I love that..(smiles wistfully) but uh ohhh Miyako is in heat huh?? Enter Sessy and look out..hehe and yes yes yes bring on da lemons..lol..I know I know Im a perv..but hey never said I wasnt hehe..anyhow love the chaps and cant wait for the next one, but please dont have that new incarnation interuppting Inu and Kagome when he marks her k?? he he (grins wickedly) till next chap talks to ya laters Kyoto gf much huggs and smiles Mija..:-)
schedule September 14, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Hey Kyoto, LOL... that was a little short but still enjoyable... he he... Poor Sessy he is one horny little Demon... But I don't think the one he desire this time will be as willing... besides I don't think he ever said Thank you to any of them... Not that I exspected that he would... But he should... Well anyway keep up the good work can't wait to see more.... Mules
person nightmareofcat
schedule September 14, 2003 at 12:00 AM
good good keep it up and update soon
person stayingput29
schedule September 14, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Hey Kyoto, wonderful new chapters... but where in the world is are horny Demon Dog... his intended pray is in heat... How cool is that... and Naraku's boy great name... And Sango so glad she finds love..... oh this story only gets better keep up the fab-tab-u-los work.... Mules
person Mija
schedule September 14, 2003 at 12:00 AM
omg...dang Sesshy has a one track mind..hehe first hes all lusting for Sango and then gets his rocks off with her and now lusts another and wants to boing her to??? dang Sessshy..hehe I had hoped Sesshy and Sango would get together but alas I know they wont..sigh but I cant wait to see what Miyako does to Sesshy if he tries to take her by force..shes gonna kick his butt..lmaoo I luv this Kyoto hope you update soon gf I cant wait to read more..with much huggs and smiles Mija..:-)
person flower
schedule September 13, 2003 at 12:00 AM
loved both your stories want 2 read more
person animechick262003
schedule September 13, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Got ymailmail! I love this fic it seemes really good so far! I hope you continue can't wait to read future chaps! ^__^
person Stayingput29
schedule September 12, 2003 at 12:00 AM
All right...... Sango is going to get a little loven.... Yipeeeee.... Grrrrr.... that Sesshoumaru... I love it can't wait for more so hurry.... Pleassssssseeeeee..... Thanks.... Mules
person nightmareofcat
schedule September 12, 2003 at 12:00 AM
lookin good please update soon
person Mija
schedule September 12, 2003 at 12:00 AM
ooh I luved it Kyoto..hehe and i KNEW it..knew Tsuki was Kyoto's brother..hehe..im soo good..lol..anyhow..damn Sango's a drooling aint she?? ya gotta love that..hehe..too funny, but what about Sesshy??? sniffles...and who is this Mysterious Miyako??? hmmmmm very interesting..needs to know..soo please please update soon k?? pretty please??? and thank you soo much for emailing me to let me know it was up..I LOVE IT!!!!...much huggs and smiles Mija..:-)