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for The Power Within

by chels

person stayingput29
schedule September 27, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I think it is going GREAT!!! SAKE!!!! ... LMAO... poor Sess I am almost feeling sorry for him a few more Sake's and I will... (rubes hands together) Now onto the lemmons... OH YEAH!!! Sessy going to get him some... SAKE!!!! .... Mules
person Mija
schedule September 27, 2003 at 12:00 AM
oooh your soo evil Kyoto..lol..and he could have any sort of power, mind powers can make a person get kinky if he messes with thier minds, then he could also be a dream sort of demon who manipulates dreams and stuff..hmmmmm but what else other than a Love demon could make people act all kinky..is he a vampire?? hehe..Im clueless gf and sooooooo luv this chap it was totally terrific!! I luved it...can not wait to read more..soo update soon K??..pretty please?? ty ty ty huggles and smiles Mija..:-)
person stayingput29
schedule September 27, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Shit Kyoto I couldn't even start to guess... You come up with some good stuff... But if it has to do with Miroku liking it I bet she makes him have sex or ohhhhhh noooooo makes his mate have sex with someone else... hell I don't know but can't wait to find out so hurry up with the next Chap... pleassseeee... OH YEAH!!! I am excited now.... Mules
person KILLFRENZY
schedule September 27, 2003 at 12:00 AM
SAKE!! *BA *BAM!*

SAKE!!!

*BAM!*

SAKE!!!

*BAM!*

So good to see Fluffy on a leash. Now, if Kagome wants to know how to please a man she should find some magazines. Other than that, very good.


SAKE!!!

*BAM!*

SAKE!!!

*BAM!*
person Miyako
schedule September 27, 2003 at 12:00 AM
what else is there to say except.... greatness.... maybe sake too.......
person No One Knows
schedule September 26, 2003 at 12:00 AM
AWESOME!!!!! Loving the sequal so far, it's great! and I can't wait to see what the power is
person ShiroInu
schedule September 25, 2003 at 12:00 AM
-is tommarow,no chapter,sigh.-
person Mija
schedule September 22, 2003 at 12:00 AM
ooh it was perfect Kyoto..the whole scene was perfect..I think Sango deserved that sweetness and romance and soo glad Tsuki gave her back her virginity...again antoher great chap..:-) till next time huggles and smiles..:-)
person nightmareofcat
schedule September 22, 2003 at 12:00 AM
i love it please update soon
person stayingput29
schedule September 21, 2003 at 12:00 AM
OH damn wish I new someone that could give me back my virginity.... lol... I am glad Sago got sweet love she needed it after that damn Demon (sexy though he may be) took it without a second thought... Good Chap I enjoyed it greatly.... Mules