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by chels

person stayingput29
schedule October 7, 2003 at 12:00 AM
LMAO... I don't know how good this review will be I am laughing way to hard... Miroku... OMG... I am like Naraku here wiping the tears from my eyes... GREAT CHAP... I hope you can give us one maybe two before Jan.... "I have breasts" my favorite line lmao.... to funny... Mules
person major glory
schedule October 2, 2003 at 12:00 AM
the suspense is killing me
person stayingput29
schedule October 2, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Hey K sto stop teasing and update already will ya....... please....... Mules
person ShiroInu
schedule September 29, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Hmm..I wonder what his power is..-ponders.- I have absolutely no idea..Except for one but i've got to figure out if it would really actually do harm..
person Mija
schedule September 28, 2003 at 12:00 AM
omg that was sooooo totally funny...Kyoto being a pervert yet a virgin??? hehe..and the whole thing with the sake and bam and Sess?? omg im still laughing and all he can say is you know you want me??? lmaooo soo funny and soo good I luve this Kyoto..cant wait to read more soo hope u update soon k??? hehe still laughing soo luved this...huggles and smiles your friend Mija..:-)
person Miyako
schedule September 28, 2003 at 12:00 AM
*SMILE* that was cool. and yup if sessy bite me i would totally bite back (without knowin the consequences of course) update update i wanna see how the whole Akuma's power thingy is written!!!!
person stayingput29
schedule September 28, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Man this weekend has been Killer with all the updates.... I love it... Great Chap Kyoto and Sess getting alittle I always love to read about that... And yes I want to know what he did to them this should be good... LOL... and the whip cream... Inuyasha is going to miss all the modern stuff if she stays and never goes ba. Hi. His noodles the whip cream that I am sure he will get to taste sooner or later... Anyway great update I can't wait until the next chap.... Mules
person nightmareofcat
schedule September 28, 2003 at 12:00 AM
sorry for the absence but im back and ready for the reviewin i loved the new chapters please update soon
person Mija
schedule September 28, 2003 at 12:00 AM
hheeeeeeee switched thier bodies???? did he did he?? that would bring about some total chaos I mean can you Imagine how Inu would feel if he was in Tsuki's body or something and he wouldnt want to mate with Kagome if she were in Miyakos body, and ya know Sess would hate it as well and so on and so forth...lol..awwwwwwwww and Sesshy finally got some awwwwwwwwww good for him..hehe another great chap Kyoto cant wait for the update soo ummmm updeate soon k?? pretty please??? ty ty ty huggles and smiles Mija..:-)
person kenji
schedule September 27, 2003 at 12:00 AM
hmm let me guess. im guessing akuma's power turns males into females. and miroku turns into one, and him and kyoto do something kinky