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for The Power Within

by chels

person LonerWolf
schedule December 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This is a really good serious you've got going. Please write again soon.
person Megan Consoer
schedule August 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
person so ummm
schedule July 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Is this story ever going to end or what.
person Kristin
schedule January 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
i think you should keep the story going! but i want to see much more sesshomaru!!!!
person Kera Sheden
schedule July 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Okay, now I'm sick. I was slightly nice when I commented on your other fic - but this is sick. You made a SEQUEL to that wreched fic!? For God's sake, MIROKU - BELONGS - WITH SANGO!! What even crazed your mind into thinking 'Hey, Sango and Sesshomaru make a good couple' NO! You're exactly like one of those stinkin' village girls who always flirt with the houshi going 'Oh he's so dreamy, I wanna bare your child.' And Miroku with Kyoto? No offence but EW! Please- stick within the species. Once again I state, do you even pay any attention to Sango and Miroku's devolted love towards eachother in the series, or are you too stobborn with your own feelings to Miroku to even consider it? Oh, and Sango's not one of those people who see someone random and think, 'Oh, he's cute.' You disgust me.
person cassandra
schedule February 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
KEEP IT GOING!!! come on, i think it is so cool that everyone has someone. if you continue on and talk a little and do a few seens for all the couples it would make this story better. you should at least write about 30 chaps. kuddos!
person Lolo
schedule December 4, 2004 at 12:00 AM
SWEEEEEEET!
person Anubis
schedule December 3, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Very nice keep it going!
person Anon
schedule September 7, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Keep the story going, it is very good. In other words, Option 1! Akuma is pretty messed up, I somehow think Naraku may end up dead VERY fast...
person LoganSaj
schedule September 7, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Keep the story going, it is very good. In other words, Option 1! Akuma is pretty messed up, I somehow think Naraku may end up dead VERY fast...