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for "Damned If You Do..."

by gerankel

schedule September 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
You HAVE to continue! Especially with a cliffhanger like that one. I do recommend that you go back and fix some spelling errors that has occurred during the many times this site has been revamped. Please, you've got to finish this!

=^.^=
person Iyasu
schedule August 31, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Nice writing style. A few mispelled words, but that can be easily looked over. I want to see what happens next!
person marnika
schedule December 20, 2003 at 12:00 AM
i hope you have not abandoned this story or let someone else try.
schedule September 22, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Hey! It's me Ras! Great start! very detailed. Incredible writing! Sesshoumaru is so in character. I just love that. Ah hah!
he said, fate is what you make of it! ha! riiigghhtt. I think fate has something very interesting in store for our inu youkai whether he likes it or not! You have a good writing style, very descriptive and thoroughly thought out in terms of time line and
character personalities. Will wait for the update and get another email to ya soon. Ras.
person Kim
schedule September 13, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Please update soon. It was a really good beginning.
person TygerLily
schedule September 11, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Wow. I loved that. Sure there was no action yet, but I can tell by your style of writing that'll it'll be well worth the wait. I'm really looking forward to reading more since the first part was so good. It was good, good stuff. ^.^ So, keep up the good work! ^.~
person animechick262003
schedule September 10, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Hey I like yur fic! Keep going it seems really interesting!