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by HeartlessEnchantress

person stayingput29
schedule September 14, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Sesshoumaru to the rescue... He He... Naraku as all the shards now will he be able to get Kogame back... Me wonders... Well anyway thanks for updating, I enjoy this story alot and now wait patiently for yet another chapter, a good one too I bet Old Sessy seems really pissed... LOL... serves him right... taking Kagome's shards... Until then... thanks for sharing ... Mules
person kenji
schedule September 14, 2003 at 12:00 AM
sesshy pisses me off in this story. i hope inuyasha comes back to life somehow, maybe via tenseiga, and takes kagome back.
person fyyrrose
schedule September 14, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I love it! So I want to bitch-slap Sess around a bit, but hey who doesn't. This was a great chapter. I was hoping that Rin would be gone, or dead, but it's your story. Please keep writing I want to use mass producing, but sure lots of chapters are always nice. Looking forward todingding your work. Till next time!
person Mija
schedule September 14, 2003 at 12:00 AM
ooh I loved your latest chap..was waiting for an update..and you are soo right..it would be weird to go from hating someone to loving them that quickly soo I think you doing an awsome job of making this go smoothly..hmmm but Naraku wants to kill Kagome and now with a whole shikon jewel will he be too powerfull for Sesshy?? hmmmm me wonders..lol..and how could Sesshy do that?? how could he invite Naraku?? did he hate that much? and then to give him the shards??? stupid Sesshy..he should of know that the site of him would of inflicted pain on Kagome and he did it anyway??? grrrrrrrrr..ok ok Im calm please update soon k?? pretty please?? ty ty ty huggs Mija..:-)
person fyyrrose
schedule September 9, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I loved the darkness, and I felt for both of them. You've done a great job! Now if only my University textbooks were this good......Please keep posting! I'm looking forward to the next chapter.....*now how can I read about rhetorical criticism in the 60s after this?*......^____^ thanks for letting me procrastinate on the dreaded H word!!!
person aleaha
schedule September 9, 2003 at 12:00 AM
k...all i want is a fake chapter in which kagome summons up Inuyasha's spirit and he kicks Sesshomaru's ass for that last bit *gggggggggrrrrrrrrrrrrrrr* I'll be waiting for more of the real story...even if you don't like my idea ;)
person JMax
schedule September 9, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Wow this is really interesting so far! I hope you update soon, I cant wait to read the rest.
person anon
schedule September 9, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I hope Inuyasha comes back to life and claims his wife and kids
person stayingput29
schedule September 9, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I just read your story and I love it......Inuyasha is dead... I have never read a fic with him dead...interesting... He will be missed...lol... And Sesshoumaru....grrrrrr... gotta love him.... And the Pups......to cute..... I look forward to an update soon... Good job.......keep writing...........A new fan......Mules
person dragonflyelj
schedule September 9, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Oh Wow! You almost got me to cry with chapter 3! You always know you are captivating your audience when you can bring them to the verge of tears. Bravo! More soon, please, I will definately be checking for updates.