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by HeartlessEnchantress

person Cm
schedule October 12, 2003 at 12:00 AM
THis is the best story I've read in awhile Please update soon!
person velvettwilight
schedule October 12, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I think this was your best chapter yet. I felt the character interaction well (On the edge of your seat drama ^_^) You made me empathize for both of the characters, even Sesshoumaru. Oh, I think you answered any questions I might have had also here. I can't wait for the next chapter ^_^
person lacy
schedule October 12, 2003 at 12:00 AM
what's wrong with chaps being 'too long' it was nice! Just write what needs to be writen and don't apoligize!

Very interesting story, I love the love/hate relationship going on here. I mena she's not instantly falling in love with him.

I LOVE the kids.. hee hee.

only thing I noticed, in the series the original chick who made the jewle.. they made it clear that Inuyasha was also part of the reincarnation. He looks just like her, only masculine with the demon in him as well.

That could certainly add some interesting tid bits of intrege, if part of her atraction to Inu Yasha was an attraction to part of herself, a need then. So she would STILL need him. Just like Kikyou. Because they would all be a part of eachother.

And wouldn't that just piss Sashomuru off to no end? (its fun pissing off the puppy!)

LET ME KNOW WHEN YOU UPDATE PLEASE?!?!?
person pratz
schedule October 12, 2003 at 12:00 AM
This is the best angst fic I've ever read. Really. I mean it. Thank you.
person nightmareofcat
schedule October 11, 2003 at 12:00 AM
aw man you truly are heartless lol well anyway update soon
person REDWOLF
schedule October 11, 2003 at 12:00 AM
OK, I love this story, it has become one of my favorites. An thanks for the LONG chapter, I like it!!!!
person fyyrrose
schedule October 11, 2003 at 12:00 AM
too long????? No it was too short ^____^ This was a great chapter!!!!!! I can't wait to see how Kagome will turn out once all the shards are back in her.....and I hope that Kikyou gets everything she deserves (not a Kiki fan) I know this is supposed to be a romance, and I love Sessy and all, but I would love to see Kagome kicking his ass ^____^ we-ll I'll be patiently awaiting for the next segment ^_~
person KENJI
schedule October 11, 2003 at 12:00 AM
so is inuyasha ever coming back? i hate to see kagome treated this way, i hope sesshoumaru gets his ass kicked. what was with kagome kissing sesshoumaru in this chapter? usually sess forces her to, but this time she did it on her own
person jane
schedule October 11, 2003 at 12:00 AM
ive seen better!
person dragonflyelj
schedule October 11, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Yay! A new Chapter. I loved it, so much emotion from Sesshoumaru! OK, update soon please.