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by HeartlessEnchantress

person nightmareofcat
schedule November 5, 2003 at 12:00 AM
omg i love it!
if you dont post another chapter very soon im gonna die and take you with me!
update soon please
person pratz
schedule October 28, 2003 at 12:00 AM
your angsty is the best. i'm starting to imagine this scene:

"I never want this child! This is your pup, damn it! Not mine! I never love you! Never!"--Kagome said that to Sesshoumaru, and the 'dull ache inside his chest' grows larger and larger.

keep on going! ^_^ i love you!
person Panthera
schedule October 26, 2003 at 12:00 AM
you know what? i NEVER like sess/kag fics and i mean NEVER! trust me i am a loyal inuyasha hard core all the way but you know what THIS STORY IS SOOOOOOOOOOOOOO F**** GOOD!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! DAM!!!!!!!!!! i love the style!
It totally fits sess's chara! pl! please keep up the story! PLEASE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! i love it when u make long chapters! PLEASEEEEEEEEEEEE update soon! (and keep kagome not liking sess it makes the story that much good!) P.S. U MADE ME CRY LIKE 20 times only good stories have that affect on people. I have soooo much sympathy for kag. PLEASEEEEEEEEEEE update!!!!

~Panthera~
ur #1 fan!!!!
person nightmareofcat
schedule October 25, 2003 at 12:00 AM
lovin it please update soon
person Sailor Star Bravery
schedule October 23, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Story is Perfect. In suspense for the next chapter. Please...Please...Please...Put next chapter up soon. I'm in suspense!!!!!!!!!!!
person yelly
schedule October 23, 2003 at 12:00 AM

To a great Writer
Great chapter loved the bow made up of her family really good idea any way i know your going to respond because you have before but i still am going to urge you to write and post the next chapter as soon as possible.

a huge fan
yelly
person Reiku
schedule October 17, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Hmm... Not bad. Sesshou seems a little ooc. I really can't see Sesshoumaru invite his archrival Naraku to a dinner party. Sesshoumaru has said over and over in this story that he hates hanyou.. so why is he so hot to have a little hanyouh Kah Kagome? If it's because their kids will be full blood, how does he know this? You must make sure that Sesshoumaru does not react to information that only you the author or the readers may know. Another thing. and this is just a pet peeve with me. Kagome/Inuyasha kids can't be hanyou they're only a quater demon. =^_^= I'm not sure what they'd really be called. It's really not in Kagome's nature to hate anyone.. though people change and having one children threaten could be enough to do. Ahem.. it takes several hours for a woman to conceive and even then it takes 5-6 weeks for their body chemistry to change enough to detect the infant. It would be possible even with Sesshoumaru's superb sense of smell to scent the baby. If for no other reason it hasn't been conceived yet. Eh.. sorry for the rant but the whole, male ejaculates and instantly knows his partner is with child is yet another pet peeve of mine.
person Sepharin
schedule October 15, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Woo! You gotta finish this one.. totally. I like it.
person TJ
schedule October 12, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Please give that arrogant ass a good, hard kick!!!
person Jaded Neko
schedule October 12, 2003 at 12:00 AM
This gets more intriguing with every chapter. I can not wait until your next chapter. Please don't make us wait long.