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for Youkai Society

by HeartlessEnchantress

person Lady Of the west Gate
schedule March 29, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I was just wondering if i could use some of your ideas/plot points from
your Youkai society.... I get annoyed when people use my ideas and do
not ask... Umm hope to hear from you soon


Lady Of The West Gate

person RR
schedule February 23, 2004 at 12:00 AM
hey, i was reading ur story..and i tried to email u..but i was wondering if that is the finished product..and if it is..have u ever thought about a sequel
person Shiro Ryu
schedule January 30, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I love your story! I really wish you would update soon!!!!!!!!!
person aleaha
schedule December 1, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Ok first off I muay eay even before I get into my review. I belive that the altmit goal in story telling is to make a person feel the emotion. I think I side with Kagome on this one I have never hated Sesshomaru more then I do know after reading this story...If I was kagome I'd kill him, but I'm not kagome and I'm not writting this story so I'll just have to live with the fact that Sesshomaru is going to live...and I'm going to keep reading this story because I want to see if he redemes himself in the end...Man I still can't belive he wouldn't let Inuyasha say goodbye to her...it could have made things a lot easier for him
person AnimeHimeko
schedule December 1, 2003 at 12:00 AM
...is that it? What about her family? Can't she use her miko powers to, I don't know, restore the well? I'd feel so bad for her! She's lost everything she's ever loved! (Well, except for her children, but still...)
person Naheta
schedule December 1, 2003 at 12:00 AM
ohhhhhhhhhhh bad bad bad, GRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRr did you really have to leave it there????? i hope you up date soon


Naheta
person Lady Sarah
schedule December 1, 2003 at 12:00 AM
i cried that chapter was so sad. poor Inuyasha i mean i got why he let her go but it was just all to sad. but that just means you are a very good writter to make me cry. ok well update soon and i hope you will show the reaction of Inuyasha's pups and him. ok well thanks again for the lovely update.
person yelly
schedule November 30, 2003 at 12:00 AM
ok every day i checked if this was updated
and to my great joy it was
is this how it ends?
it made me cry
very good chapter!!!!!!!! i loved it
Sesshomaru is a bastaRD HE DIDN'T LET INUYASHA SAY GOODBYE
hope ypu keap writing
person Lacy
schedule November 30, 2003 at 12:00 AM
WEEE

Now I wasn't one of those wanting Inyu to come back and rain down bloody murder LOL

Lovely turn, maybe now she can except he's gone.. Though her family is going to be worried..
person Hentai Jane
schedule November 30, 2003 at 12:00 AM
The update totally made my day!!!! Ok, on to the review, ch 9 was great but so sad! I wish Sesshomaru would have let kagome say good bye to Inuyasha. It was good that he at least got to see his kids again. Souta's in the feudal era? Ohhh, I'm eager to see how Sesshomaru reacts to this new turn of events. The scene of Naraku's demise was very well written. I hope you post ch 10 soon.