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for Youkai Society

by HeartlessEnchantress

person Cassie
schedule November 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow!!! I really love this story I can't wait for u to update it... I can't wait to read chapter 9 ^______________^
person cheekywench
schedule November 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hey there Mate

Just read the Youkai Society, I couldnt stop reading.

Well Talk to you later mate

Keep Writing
person gemini
schedule September 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
that wasy very good so what happens next.
person Karen Lacey
schedule August 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Like write wake muse wake muse need more of everything . Hanging from the cliff some one throw me a a rope namely some new chappies and lime lemon even apple.
person izumi
schedule August 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ah, yet another Sesshoumaru/Kagome pairing how quaint. All things considered it isn't a bad "Sesshoumaru beats the crap out of Kagome slave fics" the thing that is a turn on is the known fact Kagome didn't fall for Sesshoumaru who beats her to a pulp. A woman in all working senses wouldn't fall for a man who abuses her. Kudos on that. This is one of the better slave-abuse fics I've read in ages. I noticed you have a few mistakes spilled here and there, minor grammar boo boos and typos. Since you requested it in the A/N's I am going to be at least a tad honest in informing you , you need a BETA to fix it up for you. I wouldn't bother to tell you and point out a little but I feel this fic has a lot of potenial so you should look over the casualities in your story. Well, other than that I want to say I really enjoyed reading your story it's rare that I'm nice in a review ,goes to show you how much this story shot up in my approval scale. I'm looking forward to your updates.
person Lacey
schedule August 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love the sad yet ruthless sessshomaru who is brooding over an onna that he always coveted . It is pretty sad
that while Inuyasha is the worser off socially Sessy is walled of being in his postion he must gaurd against all
kinds of entanglements. Then like a breathe off fresh air Kagome poor Kagome does she ever come too terms
with her passionate and possive Demon lover . I like your lemon please pass the fruit.
person penpaninu
schedule July 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
pleaes write more!!! does inuyasha-zombie see his children before he goes? h ow will kagome survive?? good story!
person The Empress
schedule March 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Man, this story kicked ass! Are you gonna write any more chapters to this story? Even if you don't (but I hope you do), I still loved it. ^_^ It is kinda messed up how Sesshomaru was treating her. If that were me, we'd be fighting all the time and I guarantee he wouldn't get any pleasure from me. I don't care how powerful he is. Even though he would probably just tie me to the bed or something....T_T.
person Anon
schedule February 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
hey i read your fic its hot i love it even if its a dark fic i have a bad fetish for sesshy and kagome dark fics i can't in a way nimagine sesshoumeru being the "nice guy" in a fic its too awkward to kids yeah but to a full grown woman ? i doubt it.
every chance i get i read on aff.net dark sess/kagome fics i just lovvvvvvvvvve them!
well keep the chaps going there hot!
person Neo-Crystal
schedule January 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
WWWWWWWWWHHHHHHHHHHHHHHAAAAAAAAAAAAATTTTTTTTTTTTTT??????????????!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! HOW COULD YOU DO THAT!!!!!! nnnnoooo!!! YOU HAVE TO A SCENE WITH INUYASHA AND KAGOME! this is really a great story!! i get really involved! but right now i'm mad at fluffy so much i want to BITE HIS HEAD OFF!!!!!!!!!!