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Ah, such a refreshing twist to the K/S pairing. Excellent writing, few grammer and spelling errors, but none that drew my attention away from the story. I'm curious as to how your going to get Kagome to fall for Sessy, if Inu's kids are going to accept Sessy quickly or not. And a question, where's Rin and Jaken? Will either one of them have apart in this? I think it would an interesting concept if Rin told Kagome about the side of Sessy she's seen. Regardless, can't wait for the next chapters.

Mystic

ooh that was an awsome chapter...and as for it being dark?? heck what would anyone expect from this union?? its not like she had a choice and he had to claim her as his so it wouldnt be all love and romance and lust, it was basic possesion and it had to be done..I do feel sorry for Kagome, but Sesshy thoughts tell us he cares for her deeply..and Inu is gone..sniffles at the thought, so hopefully Kagome can find happiness with Sesshy after all, and he will be a good protecter and provider for her and her pups, they are his nephew too and he will come around I think..lol..ok enough babbling here..all I know is this is a unique plot and I love where its going and sooo cant wait to read more..sooate ate soon k?? ty ty ty huggs Mija..:-)

Good story i am liking it a lot. The only thing i find wrong is that u keep saying wrench when it should be wench. otherwise everything is great. Write more & update soon!

awwwwwwwwww (sniffles) Inu is dead??? hes gone???..(sobs) and Sesshy has claimed Kagome as his mate now huh?? but not her pups?? hmmmmm me thinks Sesshy needs to learn a lesson..hehe..and hes soo mean to Kagome..grrrrrrrrrrr...but I soooooo luv this story and where it might go..:-) wants to know what happens to Naraku when he tries to go after Kagome's shards now that shes under Sesshy's protection..hehe thats going to be good, please update soon k?? must read more, must have more..pretleaslease??? ty ty ty..huggs Mija..:-)

OoOoOo i really like it so far! ^-^... onto chappy 2

Hehe, i really like it! I love Sess/Kag fics a lot. Also, I really like how you're portraying Kagome's character. It really fit's her. It's not like she would suddenly love Sess and forget about Inuyasha, and she's also really strong in this fic; having the guts to slap Sess n' all. Sessy is also in-char, considering the situation and all. Anywho, i'll shut up now =/. Update soon!
-Tyfani-chan