rate_review Reviews

I got so excited when I saw you had updated. You did such a great of describing everyone's emotions. I could feel Sesshoumaru literally smoldering! And the intensity between Rin and Sunoo was lovely. This story has such a magical quality. So...you've got the angst coming right?? With two angelic looking beings and a hot-blooded demon with ice-cold control it's got to be trouble in paradise. Oh yes, and is there some importance of Sunoo's father being a black swan? And does the future mate resemble the one responsible for their transformation? I was just curious cuz I love black swans, soo gorgeous-

Please update soon! This is a story on my fav list in my account!

glad to see your story return, thought u may have given up on it.
i like the new chapter, and love the explanation of the change. can't wait for more.
good job on the story

This a great story and I feel remorse for Sessy here .I just want to cuddle him and make him feel better .Also i liked the twist wher Rin churned into a swan.Dose she still have brown eyes?

poor sess.

he looses the onlys one he loves...
but still a great story.
it would be nice to have someone else for sess but I wouldn't do it.
It won't fit the story.

migi-chan

omg im so conflicted. i love the swan-man, but i love sesshomaru. ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh *breathes* hhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh* gasps for air* WHAT WILL HAPPEN?!?!?! in my heart, i want sess and rin together, but i dont want swan-man hurt *cries* this is such a good story that my heart is BRAKING over it! wonderful new chapter and update soon. also, when are u starting the sequel for "heart of pain, heart of ice"? i believe u said u'd make one, but i was just wondering if u've started to work on it or will u want to finish this story first.
good job again and continue the great work!

You know, as much as I love Sunoo, he should leave Rin alone, so Sesshoumaru can get off his ass and figure out his true feelings. Then finally tell Rin how he feels. Another question is why didn't Sunoo ask Rin why she rejected his offer? If she indeed loves him then why didn't she say yes. Of course we all know deep down she has feelings for Sesshoumaru too, but he doesn't know that. Anyway I love the story, but could you post sooner, I was wondering where you were. Great storie, but you need some Sesshoumaru and Rin action in the next one.

Great update....Rin's new body sounds so beautiful. But, I'm nervous I want Sesshomaru and Rin together.... I hope you have Sess did something soon......PLEASE , PLEASE UPDATE SOON.

This is one of the best fanfictions I have ever read.

i'm really enjoying this fic. I do hope you update soon. I bet Sessho-sama is just having a wonderful time with all this*note sarcasm* poor Sessho...Anyways..Keep up the good work. Owari.
~KazeShinai
PS-when are you going to post the sequal to your other Sess/Rin fic???

okay its official,i love you! i'm ses yos you can do no wrong in my eyes.the cha chapter more than made up for the period of time we had to wait for the update. i loved it, i love you, please update soon!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!