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!!!!!when are you going to add a new chapter !!!!

I have really enjoyed the first 9 chapters of this fic. You have done a very good job with descriptive prose. I am saddened though that there are only 9 chapters. Are there more hiding somewhere inside you? And what of our poor Sess?

Caitriona

Plz do write more. Poor Sesshy. You will make him happy with Rin, correct? (hopeful look)

This was a great Chappie and I hope you will update soon because this seems so well planned and I am just so excited to actually read what you have for all of us next. So keep up the awesome writing and keep throwing those awsome chapters at us!!

Mallie

:) nice...

Scarecrow,
I have read your story Heart of Pain, Heart of Ice and I enjoyed it. I also started to read another one of your stories, titled Melting Ice. I like them both very much. I am all for Rin and Sesshoumaru fics, so i was quite reluctant to read this one, The Courting of Rin. But because of your superb writing skills, I felt it was something I should at least try out... And I must say i have been most pleasantly surprised. I cannot say that I enjoy another youkai courting Rin. But then I have only finished reading the first chapter. There is more to read, and even if Sesshoumaru and Rin don't end up together, I think I will
probably enjoy this fic all the same.
Your use of words is magnificent; I could see the 'secret place' in my mind as clearly as if I had been there before. I also liked the way you described the Swan Demon. He does sound rather handsome... lol
Again though, as I said about your fic Heart of Pain, Heart of Ice: Typos. They make the story hard to read. Myabe you should get spell check... or an editor or someone to look over and after your work. I mean you no disrespect though, just some constructive criticism. Keep up the good work, and by the way- you just got yourself a new fan... ~~Kioki :)

when are you ging to finihs your story, i really want to see the end, of course sesshomaru ends up with rin in the end(hopes). i loved your other rin sesshomaru story that you completed it was greate. i hope you pick up and finihs this one and write even more sesh and rin fics .

O.o! Very good! I like it very much indeed! Only that kept me fully enjoying it was that chapter 8 was cut off! >.< Damn and blast! Oh well...From what I gathered in 9 is that Rin is ok and thats all I needed to know ( though I am DYING to know what happened in 8 >.< ).

Anyways, this is a very sweet fairy tale so far. And Sesshoumaru is sooooooooooooooooooooooo jealous! I don't think I have seen him so damn jealous before! What a way to torture the guy. I bow to your methods. * bows repeatedly and stops due to dizzyness * @_@ Anyhoo, I can't wait til the next chapter! Until next time! ^_^

Hey, I told you I would read your stories. Lol. It is great, the development of the characters are solid and in tune with the actual characteristics from the anime. Your ability and knack for description allowed my mind to easily flow through the story, without questioning any characters physics or emotions. Your a great writer, much better than I was I believe. Thank you for allowing me to read such mastery of words and imagery.

Er...a correction to my earlier review...I didnt mean to post the first line...thas sas supposed to be for something else.