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gosh...i love the story but i want Rin to end up with Sesshomaru. i know it's kinda of selfish of me but gosh i wanted Sesshoamru to have her first kiss too. and now that she had confess her love for the swan man, i don't really see how sess and them can be together now. i also want her to love sesshomaru only too. very selfish of me but i'm a romantic so i tend to think this way. i really hope this story doesn't turn into a adultery story, would be very sad and disappointed if it did. but anyway, wonderful job on the story, sure is interesting enough to keep me going. keep up the good work and update. don't keep us waiting!

NOT COOL....goddamnit! I want Sesshomaru and Rin to be a couple!!!! *GRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRR* NOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!

Kakes

I see that you have not updated this story in a while... I hope you plan to continue this story line... I really look forward to reading more, these two are my favorite Inuyasha characters and it is hard to find well written and very intersting stories about these two characters.

This is a very perplexing plot. Kudos to you in that you've written yourself into almost an inescapable situation where Rin is "marked" and "transformed" into a swan youkai. It would be interesting to see how you extricate your story and keep it a Sess/Rin...I applaud you in your creativity !! Keeping Sess is in character totally rocks although that particular armor is slowly being denigrated through his self-reflections/comtemplation. Looing forward to your future chapters.

NOooo. what happened? Why doesn't Sesshomaru do anything? Bad Shesshomaru. Bad. Update. I wanna see Sesshomaru do somethign about Rin

Update fast! I think this is so wonderful write fast. Sesshomaru is so good at this roles. I think the swan and her make such a beutiful couple.

I really like how detailed u make everything. I can get a picture of the story in my head. I also love the whole swan thing, it's pretty cool. Anyway, plz update. SOON!

So glad you're continuing this! I was afraid you had abandoned it. It's so sad when good writer's leave open endings, but here you are! I'll wait for the next update. It's getting really good. I love the direction you're taking this story. Good work!
~quirkyslayer

UPDATE SOON!! or will be forced to send you a virus... but that make sense it i would want you to update... so update or i'll *insert gruesome threat here*

Congrats! In all of the ideas I've read to make Rin imortal, this is the best! I also like fairy tales, so keep up the good work... but don't make the readers wait long, ok?! ;P

Go Sessy, go!