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September 12, 2003 at 12:00 AM
sounds like a good start. there you got your review. now please continue
-miyu
-miyu
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September 9, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Keep writing. Please. She\...w...wait, how old? 18? Seems a little childish in thought. But I like it. Keep going with this.
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September 8, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Continue!!! Continue!!!!! ASAP!!!
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September 7, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Ooooh!!! Please continue! So far it is soooo interesting. Is Sesshoumaru going to say no now that Rin has said yes. Or perhaps he will let her go at her own wish. Maybe he will show her those pent up feelings before it is too late? (I hope ;P) Keep up the great work!!!
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September 7, 2003 at 12:00 AM
hahaha! Poor Sess! Greatr fic. I hope you update soon!!
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September 7, 2003 at 12:00 AM
this is real good. but rin is the who whos not thinking straight, she and sesshy end up together not some swanboy. sry but this is pissing me off, even so i will read but make an excuse to get rid of him or something. i have a great suggestion but i'm going to save it and see what u do instead. i will check back soon, laterz. and GET RID OF BIRD BOY.
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September 7, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Hey I reviewed earlier but I guess you must have removed it.
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September 7, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Ah!!!! Whats going to happen??? YOU MUST TELL ME!!!!
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September 7, 2003 at 12:00 AM
MORE NOW.^_^
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September 7, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I like this fic very much. I natenately look forward to future chapters. Your writing style is quite good, as is your spelling and grammar. I don't really recall any mistakes, which either means you didn't make any, or your writing is so good it distracted me from them. I do hope you continue this fic in the near future.
Later - Crash
Later - Crash