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September 22, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Great story! Its good to know there is a chance between Rin and Shesshoumaru. Please update soon!!!!
And why can't Rin have both of them,lol, I know i have such a sick mind.
And why can't Rin have both of them,lol, I know i have such a sick mind.
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September 20, 2003 at 12:00 AM
thanks for updating. chapter 2 only whets my appetite more.
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September 19, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Hey!! This sounds interesting, I like it so far. Swan boy, as someone put it so gracefully lol, sounds very original and very interesting. And it sounds like Sesshoumaru is going blow a fuse pretty soon. I like this story very much so far, please continue and post soon. Thanks and keep up the good work.
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September 19, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Hello, (waves) just read your story and I love it... Swan Youki OH MY!!! Rin deserves a swan ...lol... But poor Sess what is his problem is he in love aan'an't face it or what.... Will his heart be broken... I have to wonder... anyway great story so far I look forward to another update soon.... Mules
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September 19, 2003 at 12:00 AM
nice story i like it please update soon
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September 19, 2003 at 12:00 AM
you're starting another story already?? what about this one?? it's off to a great start. please update this one too! I've been waiting
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September 19, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Wow, this is a good chapter.
I love the way you describe everything, espesially the way you describe the youkai.
Long chapters are always nice to have. So don't worry. ^_^
But Sesshoumaru is weary around 'sunoo hakuchou'.
This story has a catch. Doesn't it?
If it does I can tell already.
I hope 'sunoo hakuchou' doesn't use Rin.
Other than that, So far so good. ^_~
I love the way you describe everything, espesially the way you describe the youkai.
Long chapters are always nice to have. So don't worry. ^_^
But Sesshoumaru is weary around 'sunoo hakuchou'.
This story has a catch. Doesn't it?
If it does I can tell already.
I hope 'sunoo hakuchou' doesn't use Rin.
Other than that, So far so good. ^_~
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September 19, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I love the way you describe everything.
Your words are very unique. As is your writing style.
I couldn't find any mistakes in either chapters.
Your so good, the story must of distracted me.
Hardly anyone can do that.
Jeez, I need to pay more attention to good stories for now on.
Your one of my favorite authors now.
Keep up the good work!
Your words are very unique. As is your writing style.
I couldn't find any mistakes in either chapters.
Your so good, the story must of distracted me.
Hardly anyone can do that.
Jeez, I need to pay more attention to good stories for now on.
Your one of my favorite authors now.
Keep up the good work!
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September 19, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Well written. I love the way your words flow. There is an beautiful intensity to your writing that capture the readers imagination and drags them in. I think you are fast becoming one of my fav authors on this site. Oh and I read your other work. I love it as well. I love onal nal writing, it shows you have put a lot of thought into what you put forth. Again excellent work on both your fics!
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September 16, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Hell ya continue! It's hard to find good Rin ficage, go for it. I wanna see what Sesshamarou-sama does to the pretty boy *grins*