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for The Courting of Rin

by Strawberries

person bad luck hulahula
schedule November 6, 2003 at 12:00 AM
This is a great fic! Can't wait to see where you're headed with the plot.
person ApriL
schedule November 2, 2003 at 12:00 AM
But...but...what about the swan youkai. I mean, I Love sesh/rin pair, bu, but i wonder what's going to happen to him
person Enula
schedule November 2, 2003 at 12:00 AM
This is a great story! I really love it. I'll be looking for the next chapter. ^^
person gelfy
schedule October 31, 2003 at 12:00 AM
oh i love this
it is written so well
and its so sweet
*loves it*
person Tiranth
schedule October 31, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Awww...so sweet. I love the line "a raven shadowed by the wing of a swan" (I hope I qouted it right) very poetic. Can't wait for more!
person Angry Flame
schedule October 30, 2003 at 12:00 AM
UM MAD!!! WHY U GOT TO BE GIVIN SESHURU A U A HARD TUM. IT AINT EREN RIGHT. GICVING RIN SUUNI AND SESHUR ANINT GOT BUT ONE ERM. THAT AINT RIGHT I SHO HOPE U AINT GO BE LETTIN HIM FIGH SUNUNI THAT WONT BE RIGHT. HE GONE BE GETTIN BE ALL UP AND STUFF CUS HE AINT GOT BUT ONE ERM YALL MEAN ON THIS SITE. THAT JUST AIN RIGHT. hEY HI HE WAS HLODG HER WITH ONE ERM.? ANYWAY I LIKE IT IF U GON GIB HIM BAC HIM ERM.
person Nekiochan
schedule October 30, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I hope you get better. I hate to see one of my favorite authors get sick.

Awww.....The fourth chapter was so sweet at the end. Awwww!!! I just can't get over that part. *starts to act like a giddy schoolgirl.*

I wonder what Rin will do? Man, to chose from Sesshoumaru or the Swan youkai. That's got to be the toughest choice anyone can make. Whoa!!

Anyway, My usual phrase, "Keep up the good work...."
person DelKaidin
schedule October 30, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Poor Sesshy.. just can't admit his feelings can he? Excellent story!
person Taiki
schedule October 30, 2003 at 12:00 AM
*wahhaaa* I love you! How I have awaited this chapter ^^ *lol* I know - I'm a strange person. Ok on to the review. I. just. love. it. This chapter has a excellent flow of words and desciptions. I could nearly 'feel' the warm breeze coming into Sess' Room. But you left me curios again. Whats Sess up to?? Ok he don't want Rin to answer Sunoo's question... *arg* many many hugs Taiki PS: I hope you will get better soon! Poor, sick scarecrow...
person Amanda
schedule October 30, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Great! I like you show the way Rin is feeling for the swan guy (forgot his name) and Sesshoumaru!