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November 29, 2003 at 12:00 AM
NOOOOOO!!!!
What kind of ending is that!??
*sigh*
Nice cliff-hanger to chapter 5.
Very good story! You've got some good characterization going, and you have the skill of writing Sesshoumaru very IC, very convincingly. I especially like that he almost not aware of his feelings, but is at the same time-- that nicely realistic confused way of things.
Please continue!
What kind of ending is that!??
*sigh*
Nice cliff-hanger to chapter 5.
Very good story! You've got some good characterization going, and you have the skill of writing Sesshoumaru very IC, very convincingly. I especially like that he almost not aware of his feelings, but is at the same time-- that nicely realistic confused way of things.
Please continue!
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November 27, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Hurry up and finish!!!!
You are evil!!!!!!
You are evil!!!!!!
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November 20, 2003 at 12:00 AM
im still keeping my fingers crossed for sesshoumaru
good chapter :-)
good chapter :-)
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November 17, 2003 at 12:00 AM
*jaw drops* EVIL!!!! EVIL!!! But good. :) I really can't wait for the next chapter...poor Sesshomaru.
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November 16, 2003 at 12:00 AM
bad cliffy! bad cliffy! Rin you better pick Sesshoumaru-sama! yea, i'm fine. -_-j
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November 16, 2003 at 12:00 AM
This story is so good! I hope Sesshomaru tells Rin his feelings before it's too late because it's obvious that Rin is enchanted with Swan Boy! I haven't read the last two chapters so far, but I hope you continue this story! And how will Sess get Rin to change her mind??
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November 16, 2003 at 12:00 AM
No, no cliffy!! Keep writing, PLEASE!!!!! I want to know what happens next?! It seemed like Sess and Rin weavinaving their moment, and she wishes for Swan Boy. This is such a good story!
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November 15, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I Can't Belive You!! YOU MADE A CLIFFHANGER??? KYAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA!!! Update Soon: I want to know Rin's answer! (please! let it be a YES!)
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November 15, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Those cliffy. Just got to love them. I enjoyed the chapter, but Sess was clearly left out of this scene. He was witnessings all that Sunoo was expressing. That must have really got under his skin. Knowing Sess he will not interfer. Update soon.
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November 15, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Aaaaaaaaahhhhh!! How can you do something so mean??? *arg* I want to know her answer *sniff* Normally I'm a patient person but now...I need the next chap ^^ Ok, enough rambling. The flow of this chapters isn't so good as the others. The descriptions ar beautiful but it feels too..too short maybe? I will wait for the next chapter. *hugs* Taiki