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February 28, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hey! It's Dragon Faere from FF.net. Yes, I'm guilty of wandering around this site once in a while, but then I came across your story and had to check it out all over again. I'm reviewing mostly because I have a question: is there a specific reason as to why this fic is rated R as opposed to the one on FF.net? (I believe it's of lower rating, correct me if I'm wrong.) I'd greatly appreciate it if you cleared that little bit up for me. Til then, I look forward to you next chapter of this wonderful tale.
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February 26, 2004 at 12:00 AM
that was so sweet but is rin going to leave her sess-sama or stay with him? hmmmmmmmmmmmmmm
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February 15, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Scarcrow, you are fast becoming a favorite of mine. What a beautiful story you've created here! ::Sighs:: I only hope that my stories are as... true to character as yours seem to be. Personally, I hope taht Rin falls for Sesshomaru, that she can give him what he seems to be lacking...
Butd hod hoped she could do so in her human form. A dog and a swan... hmmm... It is perfect though, for Rin to become a swan,be sbe so.. I dunno, pure and beautiful...
Butd hod hoped she could do so in her human form. A dog and a swan... hmmm... It is perfect though, for Rin to become a swan,be sbe so.. I dunno, pure and beautiful...
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February 14, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Aw man...i don't know if her turning into a youkai is a good or a bad thing. update soon pLease
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February 13, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wow, i can't wait for your next chapter.... keep updating it please. I dun mind your chapters short. i really like the story.
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February 13, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Thx for this update !
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February 13, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hello...I'm still at the beginning, but I LOVE your story so far, and I love Sunoo. *blush* I also love how you describe swa swan demons, and hope you'll forgive me for 'borrowing' from the concept for a character I roleplay online. (I've already said that an author inspired me.) I will make the concept my own, but I love how you portray him. Your descriptions and wording are so easy to read and beautiful...elegant. I love how you're portraying "fluffy's" reactions too. Keep it up ^_^
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February 13, 2004 at 12:00 AM
i usually read this story on ff.net but you haven't updated on ff.net so i will leave my review here. it was a sweet chapter. she sounds like an angel instead of a swan. i love rin. she is so adorable in the anime. i like your swan youkai character but in my weird head i think sess and rin belong together no matter what. they are the 'it' couple...meant to be together. i can't wait to see how you will write out the rest of the story. i hope you will update soon. =]
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February 13, 2004 at 12:00 AM
How a R/S story should be written!
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February 13, 2004 at 12:00 AM
yippee! an update and a very good one it was.
If Rin has turned into a swan even if she choses Sesshoumaru wont
there be trouble ?
If Rin has turned into a swan even if she choses Sesshoumaru wont
there be trouble ?