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for Trapped Soul

by Yuri

schedule May 16, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Awwwwwww!!! You really need to update!!!
schedule June 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
i really like this story and i hope that you continue it! :D a sesshomaru mpreg fic? i haven't read one in a while! i can't wait! fluffy-chan is hot! so is naraku! XD please update soon! :D

~Fly-chan~
person .
schedule December 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hurry and update!
person Kiotana
schedule August 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Scary...
person Twice987
schedule January 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I like Naraku/Sesshoumaru too but so very few ppl make any*sigh*the cruelty. Nar, Sess and Kouga are my favorite characters. I have read VERY few Nar/Sess but so far you are the 1st one to my knowledge to write one with Sess getting pregnant even if its not Naraku the 1st Sess mpreg is this one. So plz update soon.
person Aku
schedule September 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Update soon! Please!
person Moonbay
schedule July 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
You totally have to continue this! Your off to an amazing start, but just a bit of contructive critizime.I notice that you switched a lot between present tense and past tense. It makes the story kinof confusing. Other than that I was very impressed.i'll be hoping to see some Mpreg in the future!
person Youko Kurama
schedule June 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
PLEASE NO.....!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! SESSHY DONT GET RAPED!!!!!! T.T
person ady
schedule May 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
it is great so far!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
person Eye of Ra
schedule January 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
long time leaving this alone without an update of any kind...


is there any way to get you go continue this? you cut it off at a very interesting moment. heh. Naraku/Sess is my *fave* pairing.. and you are right.. there is a serious lack of them to be found.. another reason why the next story i start will be [most likely pointless/plotless] Naraku/Sessy and or Sessy/Naraku. heh.

but yeh... you really need to update your story. because its good, has an awesome and rare pairing, and you left off in such a horrible place!! <> i swear.. Ra... and people call Naraku evil... but it seems you haven't even touched this in two years! O_o
so please!! my 'karasu' needs some love!! however he can get it... ^_~